My Poem

Seeing as no one has given me suggestions, i have written some more but it i still not finnished andI am still open for suggestions or examples.This is only an unfinished first draft.......

Jazzy is a can of coke, bursting toget out. Jazzy is popping crazy, then stops, then she burns. She is a sunshower followed by a rainbow. A ukelale, with only four strings. Jazzy is a picture book, lots to show you but little to say.

How do you like it? I think it's okaybut it needs to sound better and more lines. I'd love to here other peoples poems, pleeaaze!?
Ah well, have to go now, need food, neeeeeeeeeed dinner!

Jazzy

My beautiful dog is called Jazzy.
She is a Kelpie + Ridgeback and is very energetic and playful. We got her from the pound when she was 4 and she was very naughty, pulled on the lead, got into fights etc. etc. Now we have tamed here a little but she is still mad.
Of course, she isn't the puppy she once was and, being 9, has a bit of grey around the nose, but she still acts like she is. She just doesn't wanna grow up!

I am writing a poem about Jazz using metaphors but but so far I've only done 1 line. Here it is:

Jazzy is a can of coke, bursting to get out.

I'm not very good at this, does anyone have any ideas? Have you ever made a poem about your dogs? I would love it if you could share it! I have decided, I am calling all poets (or novices or people who just wanna have fun....) to share with me there poems about dogs!
I'm excited now! This will be fun! Please put your poems or suggestions about my poem in a comment. I can't wait!

Hello & Welcome!

Hello & Welcome to psycho dogs!
We all know how psycho some crazy dogs can be, and here is a site to share your stories, look at cute pictures and lots more!
Some people call crazy dogs "BAD" but here at psycho dogs, we love them!
So what they sometimes dig up your garden or get into fights, you have to forget all that when they give you a loving lick or a big hug!